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craptastic poetry by ~R-enku:iconR-enku:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Can't be just run away?
Theres nothing left for us here
but broken dreams and lost loves
I've got money and some mixtapes
We can hitch-hike to Tennessee
Start a new life away
from this hell called Pennsylvania
What reasons do we have to stay here?
All we have is each other
So why not take a risk?
Nothing left to lose...
©2008 ~R-enku
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yeah. I don't know why people think I have poetic Potential. -fail-

-had no idea what catagory to put this under-
-morefail-

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~arielsalaam:iconarielsalaam: May 17, 2008, 7:46:01 PM
lol this is cute

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People are like slinkys. Absolutely useless, but fun to watch when falling down stairs. :slow:

~c0ntr01d0g:iconc0ntr01d0g: May 30, 2008, 4:18:42 PM
Tennessee is fun.
I'd rather New Jersey, in my personal opinion. The garbage bin of the United States has a strange allure to it. Plus, I can't stray too far away for the east coast.
Your writing style is...God, reeeally cute.


ohandchristinaneedstomakeadeviantartaccount.

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If I were a geek, you'd be my pocket protector.
~R-enku:iconR-enku: May 30, 2008, 4:32:05 PM
I've never been, but I really want to go.
Ick. I want to get farther away than New Jersey. I'd rather go even farther away than Tennessee, but it seems nice so I picked there. :3
is cute good or bad?


YES. she does. I'll have to bother her tomorrow.
~c0ntr01d0g:iconc0ntr01d0g: Jun 1, 2008, 7:21:00 AM
California is a "coast", but that would take a loooong time to get to. But, at one point in my life I'd like to just walk to another state. Which is a sad dream, considering I have the stamina of a hamster(not to mention the attention span), and I'm impatient.
How about Sweden? You get free health care there and everything is socialized.

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If I were a geek, you'd be my pocket protector.
~R-enku:iconR-enku: Jun 1, 2008, 7:25:24 AM
I don't want to go to california. I hate the ocean. D:
rofl, just go hiking a lot over the summer. Eventually, your stamina might improve.
If I'm going out of country, I'd rather go to New Zealand.
~c0ntr01d0g:iconc0ntr01d0g: Jun 1, 2008, 8:16:15 AM
Dude, new Zealand is an island(well, two islands). You'd kinda have to learn to like the ocean to go there.

I just took some Ibuprofem. I really didn't know how many pills to take, so I took two. Er, my parents weren't home, so...
It's really gonna suck If I drop dead at the keyboard.

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If I were a geek, you'd be my pocket protector.
~R-enku:iconR-enku: Jun 1, 2008, 8:51:01 AM
But I like new zealand D: Plus I have an uncle there. out of my four uncles, hes the coolest.

o.o If you die, I'll have to kill myself. ;;
~c0ntr01d0g:iconc0ntr01d0g: Jun 1, 2008, 8:56:01 AM
Nah, I'm okay. I don't feel any better though, and I'm still not hungry so I guess it didn't work.

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If I were a geek, you'd be my pocket protector.
~R-enku:iconR-enku: Jun 1, 2008, 8:57:05 AM
If you still don't feel good when your parents get back, you should tell them.
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